Short Screenplay Rewrites For The Self Conscious
GETTING OVER THE UNCERTAINTY
I wrote a script two years ago that was revived last week. To date, I had written 3 versions of the script and the Producer/Director team interested have been happy with all of them. It’s simply a matter of logistics, funding and scheduling that has delayed things.
A while back, the director posed a slight change to the structure of the story so I got to work on the 4th version of the screenplay. I also took the opportunity to change a few tiny details here and there. Mostly dealing with how certain scenes were staged.
As I wrote the 4th draft of the script, I found myself wondering why I hadn’t thought of certain things before. I started doubting myself. I was more than happy with the 3rd draft and even though a lot of time has passed, are my opinions really that different? Have I changed as a writer?
Of course, the answer is yes. I have changed and evolved as a writer. The whole point is to get better with every page. Every sentence even. I’m sure I’m not alone on this but I became anxious about it. Each new draft of this particular story I’ve written has been the best draft yet. This line of thought led me to a very real fear that screenwriters can experience.
WHAT IF THE NEXT DRAFT IS BETTER TOO?
Essentially, I printed out the 7 page script and wrote most of it from scratch. The story remained the same but I restructured a lot of material and eliminated a few moments that were no longer needed. I ended up trimming nearly 2 pages out of the screenplay and it definitely reads a lot faster.
The entire time I was asking myself if I was over thinking things. Was I over simplifying the story?
After a while, I decided to print out the new script as well. I read them both line by line picking out the best possible moments from each. This step paid off as I came to a realization.
DON’T FOCUS ON THE ‘NEXT’ DRAFT
Just write the best possible draft you can right now.
Once I combined the two drafts of the screenplay, a couple key moments returned and the story was even better. I was so focused on trimming that I hadn’t taken a step back to consider what I had lost. My self conscious fear actually led to improvements in my writing. Neat.
I’m pretty happy I made that decision because the new draft is 100% my favorite thus far. The Champion Draft as I call it.
BUT WHAT IF THEY WANT ANOTHER DRAFT?
The answer is simple. If another draft is required down the road, I’ll just work hard and create a new Champ. What I love about rewrites is the incredible amount of problem solving challenges you must face and eventually overcome.
There’s nothing more satisfying than coming up with a BETTER idea.








I’ve had the same exact problem as you.
I’ll write something, think it’s great, and walk away from it for a few days (or weeks or months). When I return to it, I always end up reading it differently. I’ll see elements about it I no longer understand or agree with, and I find myself rewriting. Sometimes, I wonder how many drafts it’s going to take before it’s finally perfect. But there is no perfect.
You said it best (and what a great realization): “Just write the best possible draft you can right now.” I’m going to write that out and tack it to my corkboard. Thanks for leaving this morsel out there.
First time reader, great site, great content. I’m looking forward to reading more!
Thank you so much for the kind words!
I completely agree “There is no perfect” But it’s a fun target to shoot for.
It’s nice to know that others share these fears and insecurities! Great to hear from fellow passionate screenwriters!